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Tuesday, August 2, 2011

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 Many people will think of going abroad to another foreign countries to learn and experience English. I will suggest you guys to go to one of these camp. Camp Big Apple, and Ranch West camp. In order to help you to make a decision, I will give you some pros and cons of each camp.
 Since the purpose of going abroad camp is to learn English, we should take a close look at their programs. Camp Big Apple focuses on building vocabulary and math skills with the goal of preparing for the test such as SAT. On the other hand, Ranch West Camp focuses on a vareity of subjects. Students can choose subjects they would like to study. I think Ranch West Camo has better program becuase Camp Big Apple focuse too much on preparing for the test that they don't need to know yet.
 They should also have good daily living environment. Camp Big Apple make students to stay in dormitories with other Korean students. This can provide an environment for studying, however, if Korean students are together they will probably speak Korean. This can give negative effects to all of the students who are participating in this camp. However, Ranch West Camp makes students to home-stay which can help them to improve their English skill because they will have Native English speakers all around them.
 Parents and students should also consider about the teachers. Camp Big Apple has teachers who are Korean with at least Master Degree. However, if Korean students meet Korean professors, there will be chances to speak Korean. Also, we don't know what subject of Master Degree they have. Although, Ranch West camp has techers who recently graduated from the local university. They can have a lack of teaching experiences. However, they can have good grammar and accent because they are Native English speakers.
 Considering these factors, I think Ranch West camp is a better camp for Korean students to go because of many criterias and the environment provided for the students.

3 comments:

  1. Yes, of course!!! 'Ranch West Camp' IS THE BEST!!! I liked your essay.

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  2. Nicely organized and you have usednthentransition words well. Next time Chaco for simple spelling errors, though.

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  3. Phew~ I'm finally writing comment on your blog!

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